Peer Review #8 (Ngaire Ale)

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https://www.ngaireale1.wordpress.com/2017/09/27/the-waste-land/comment-page-1/#comment-393

Hey Ngaire!

I really enjoyed reading your piece as to how the modernist poem “The Waste Land” by T.S Elliot (1922) has moved you. I appreciate how you gave some historical context in your introduction as it gave me a sense of what you wanted to discuss about in your piece. Your analysis of “The Wasteland” was also done quite well as you explored various literary techniques that Eliot has utilised and explained its technique. However, I felt like you have not really answered the question and that was how Eliot’s poem “The Waste Land” has moved you. Rather than writing a sentence at the end to “answer” the question, I think you should have integrated your points as to how the text has moved you throughout your analysis of the poem. In saying that, I think you did a great job in analysing the poem!

Summative Entry (American Literature)

“American Literature helps me to expand the boundaries of my own experience.”

This was the focus of this semester’s work in American Literature. The work and understanding I have obtained from this unit over the course of the semester have led me to believe that American literature has the capacity to teach us, as humans, something about our own lives and consequently ourselves—spiritually and physically. These lessons, which I am eternally grateful for, at first seem so simple and became more complex the more I studied them. For example, when we were learning about Transcendentalism, we were taught the significance of nature as an aspect of our lives and its potential to cause self-actualisation and enlightenment were remarkable. We began with Emily Dickenson, Walt Whitman, Ralph Waldo Emerson, Henry David Thoreau, Mark Twain, Martin Luther King Jr, James Baldwin, Du Bois and ending with Robert Frost, Robert Lowell, T.S Eliot, William Faulkner and postmodernist artists and authors such as Jack Kerouac, Allen Ginsberg, Frank O’Hara, John Ashbery and Jackson Pollock. Despite the time difference (from almost one to two centuries apart) of these brilliant authors, poets, and artists existed in, it astounds me to believe that their works are still relevant in contemporary society. Ultimately, all these dynamic poets, authors, and artists who defiantly challenge their societal values and culture has led to many great works that are universally relevant to contemporary society. That is, these works assisted me in expanding the boundaries of my own experiences.

We began our journey in American literature with American Indian Writing. Professor MG contrasted the spiritual emptiness of contemporary American culture and the spiritual richness of what is left of American Indian culture. This alone has made me question, why can’t American culture be more open to the lessons and culture that American Indians practice? I personally don’t think that there is a “superior” culture or tradition, more so, the existence of many diverse cultures and traditions allows other cultures to learn and appreciate something that they never once thought of. For example, contemporary American culture should expose themselves to the richness of insight and understanding about the significance of our relationship with the land (as American Indian culture has practiced). By doing this, not only both cultures benefit but also the planet along with future generations. I also found our analysis of Native American Indian Writing had a clear subversion of the dominant materialistic culture. Their writing was also in harmony with many “main-stream” American writers such as Emerson, Thoreau, Whitman, and Dickinson.

Next, we made a brief stop to the transcendentalists in 19th Century America. It’s spiritual aspect and the push for authenticity in human experience is what I found extremely engaging. We then examined two influential individuals that “led” the transcendentalist movement—Ralph Waldo Emerson and Henry David Thoreau. The exposure to this topic has inspired me to strive for a meaningful life and at the same time, to seek understanding in myself and the world around me. Emerson and has inspired me so much that I decided it would have been a great essay topic. We were given readings of Emerson and Thoreau and It was perhaps the more enjoyable readings I have ever come across in a literature unit. A sentence (in Chapter 2 ‘Where I Lived, and What I Lived For’) from Thoreau’s novel “Walden” has personally moved me: “I went to the woods because I wished to live deliberately, to front only the essential facts of life, and see If I could not learn what it had to teach, and not, when I came to die, discover that I had not lived”. Thoreau’s sentence has inspired me to live my life deliberately and with purpose. Ultimately it has helped me to expand beyond the boundaries of my own experience to live a more meaningful and fulfilling life.

After revisiting Walt Whitman and Emily Dickenson, we moved on to Mark Twain’s Huckleberry Finn. Reading Mark Twain’s novel Huckleberry Finn gave an insight to the racism that still lingered after the abolishment of slavery. We continued to discuss free expression and total acceptance of genders and cultures in America. This week, we explored the great works of Martin Luther King Jr, James Baldwin, Du Bois and Toomer. I distinctly remember discussing Du Bois quote “The problem of the Twentieth Century is the problem of the color-line” for one of my weekly blog topics. I personally think the term “colour line” is something we invent to discriminate others and illusion ourselves to believe that we are “above” another human. Hence, I encourage everyone to help this as it is everyone’s issue, not just the issue of the discriminated. I personally believe that everyone is created equal regardless of their difference. Needless to say, American Literature has not only expanded the boundaries of my own experience but has also encourage me to abolished racist limitations that can result in the acceptance of individuals from various cultures and backgrounds.

Afterwards, we explored the contrasting worlds of Robert Frost and Robert Lowell. They are both iconic poets of North America in the Twentieth Century. I personally found Robert Frost more appealing since he was the inheritor of the transcendentalists and possessed the energy of Walt Whitman to express his deep connection to the American landscape and its power to open the human spirit. This, of course, was what Emerson attempted to discuss in his essay “Nature”. Contrastingly, Robert Lowell was deeply enmeshed in the tyrannies that controlled his whole life. In his Confessional Poetry, his profound exposition of these tyrannies is his way to express his deep appreciation and gratitude for his given life. We then made a quick stop at American Modernism. We looked at William Carlos, Charlie Chaplin and lastly T.S Eliot’s Four Quartets. The semester ended with William Faulkner and The Beats, New York School and Postmodernism. Ultimately, this semester has been a wonderful exploration of America’s history and the magnificent works of great American poets, writers and artists. With this unit coming to an end, I wanted to express my gratitude for the lessons that Professor MG and Dr. JB has taught me. Lessons that have and forever will expand the boundaries of my own spiritual and physical experiences.

 

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http://www.lostinliterature1.wordpress.com/category/american-literature/creative-blogs/

Best Critical Blog: 

http://www.lostinliterature1.wordpress.com/category/american-literature/best-critical-blog/

Peer Reviews: 

http://www.lostinliterature1.wordpress.com/category/american-literature/all-peer-reviews/

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Summative Entry (American Literature)

Peer Review #7 (Christella Bade)

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https://www.christellabade.wordpress.com/2017/10/23/blog-9-american-literature/comment-page-1/#comment-66

Hey Christella,

I enjoyed reading your piece on how the poet Allen Ginsberg has inspired you. I definitely agree that Ginsberg’s poem  “A Supermarket in California” captures the ideas that he is attempting to convey to his readers, that is, the poem illustrates our obsession with consumerism and materialism. Ginsberg’s decision to address this problem of being enslaved to consumerism creates this sense of urgency to act now in the present moment and change ourselves for the better before its too late. I personally think your piece was well written and your decision to juxtapose Whitman’s criticism of his society and Ginsberg’s criticism of his society (by contrasting the themes in their poetry) has consolidated your ideas. To improve on your piece, I think you could have elaborated more on your points and expand further on your ideas. Apart from that, I think you did a good job with this week’s topic.

Week 10 Blog- Creative

Alternatively, try imitating any one of the poems or prose texts that you have read for this week. See whether their creativity has kindled something new in your own imagination.

I will be trying to ‘imitate’ Roethke’s poem “Root Cellar”. However, I want to keep the theme of the original poem. The prominent theme of this poem that stood out to me was the poet’s celebration of the determination of life forms (despite its “insignificance”) to survive in rough environments.

 

Root Cellar by Theodore Roethke

Nothing would sleep in that cellar, dank as a ditch,
Bulbs broke out of boxes hunting for chinks in the dark,
Shoots dangled and drooped,
Lolling obscenely from mildewed crates,
Hung down long yellow evil necks, like tropical snakes.
And what a congress of stinks!
Roots ripe as old bait,
Pulpy stems, rank, silo-rich,
Leaf-mold, manure, lime, piled against slippery planks.
Nothing would give up life:
Even the dirt kept breathing a small breath.

 

Life

Nothing could escape from the grasps of life, dark as dread,

Man runs out clutching onto his will chasing for purpose in the dark,

Breathless and exhausted,

Sprinting iron-willed from nowhere

Sweat down warm forehead, like rainfall

And what a smell he exhausted

Nothing would give up life:

Even the fish out of water clings on to life.

 

 

Peer Review #6 (Michael Harb)

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https://www.michaelharb.wordpress.com/2017/10/05/american-literature-week-9/comment-page-1/#comment-18

Hey Michael,

I just wanted to begin my comment with how I really enjoyed reading your piece on T.S Eliot’s “The Waste Land”. I liked how you chose to discuss a specific part of T.S Eliot’s piece (The 4th part of T.S Eliot’s “The waste of land” tilted “Death by water”) as it gives you the opportunity to explain and quote the text in depth. Your points as to why it “spoke to you the most directly” was also very interesting since you explained them well and incorporated an example for each of your points to consolidate your analysis. Your selection of examples that you paired up with your points was also very effective. Overall, I personally think you nailed this weeks topic question and I hope to see more from you!

 

Week 8 Blog- Creative

  1. CREATIVE: Using any one of Faulkner’s 15 character voices as a guide, create a paragraph in the voice of a character totally different to yourself. Think about people you might have overheard on the train or bus, or someone you might have seen randomly on a street corner. Invent their life, their consciousness in a paragraph. Who knows it might become the start of a larger work!

Erica: She sat quietly in her mother’s garden, eyes closed and smiling modestly as if she was surrendering her very soul to the nature that was around her. As the birds chirped melodically, her thoughts began to settle like the leaves in Autumn. She breathed deliberately, she always breathed deliberately because she believed all of her actions in life had to be deliberate. It had to be deliberate because that gave her the feeling that she had control of her life and every aspect of it. It was a way to confirm herself that she was, indeed living a life that she had hoped for. She did not want to be on a boat adrift in the endless ocean that was life. Instead, she wanted to be the captain of her boat, constantly sailing towards “destiny”.

Week 7 Blog- Critical

1/ Write a paragraph that says succinctly which of the two Roberts you preferred and for what reasons.

This week, we learnt about two iconic North American poets: Robert Frost (1874-1963) and Robert Lowell (1917-1977). I personally prefer Robert Frost because his poems are philosophical and it echoes the significance of nature and its heavenly power to transcend the human spirit. Similar to Ralph Waldo Emerson (an influential American writer of the nineteenth century who inspired nonconformity, self-reliance, and anti-institutionalism), he encourages his readers to appreciate the extraordinary in the ordinary. Since Robert Frost was an “inheritor of the transcendentalist”, many transcendentalist values are reflected through his expression in his poems. Robert Frost’s poem “The Road Not Taken” and “Directive” are two examples of his work which reflect transcendentalist values. Ultimately, Robert Frost’s “The Road Not Taken” and “Directive” are both examples of poems which encourages the ordinary man to be extraordinary by freeing himself from his own superficial barriers created from his mind.

 

 

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Peer Review #4 (Daniel David)

Link to comment: https://ddavid1818.wordpress.com/2017/09/05/literature-journal-blog-4-4/comment-page-1/#comment-87

Hey Daniel,

I personally think you did a great job on your analysis with the extract from Mark Twain’s “The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn”. Mark Twain’s prominent and masterful use of literary devices is evidently one of many aspects of his writing that assists him to “bring nature to life”. I particularly like your carefully chosen examples, how you paired it up with a literary device and a consolidated analysis to reinforce your idea that Mark Twain uses literary devices to bring nature to life. However, I’m rather disappointed that you did not elaborate more on your ideas because I really wanted to read more of your analysis. Other than that, keep up the good work! I look forward to seeing more posts from you.

 

 

Week 6 Blog- Critical

1/ DU BOIS “The problem of the Twentieth Century is the problem of the color-line”. What do you think Du Bois means? (p.885)

To get to the crux of what Du Bois means by his prescient statement “The problem of the Twentieth Century is the problem of the color-line” (885), we need to first consider the context of the term “color-line”. The term color-line was originally used as a reference to the racial segregation that existed in the United States of America after the abolition of slavery. By considering this small window of context, we can assume that he is referring to the racial segregation and tension that remains between white folk and black folk after the abolition of slavery. One may interpret this as Du Bois attempt to show “the strange meaning of being black (in) the Twentieth Century”. This prescient statement was featured in Du Bois book “The Souls of Black Folk”. This book was Du Bois attempt to abolish “the color-line” by conveying a  hidden truth to what it means to be black in a “white world”.

 

Peer Review #3 (Jackson Eagles)

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https://www.jeaglesblog.wordpress.com/2017/08/23/2nd-american-writing-blog-post/comment-page-1/#comment-9

Hey Jackson,

I personally think your piece was extremely intriguing to read and insightful. Having done the same question, I really appreciate how you tackled the question from an entirely different approach and perspective. I found your piece engaging (probably because it resonates with a majority of students and their crime of being “serial procrastinators”). The ability to live deliberately is something that I believe most individuals desire but never work for. Hence, I think to be able to live deliberately is a great achievement everyone should strive for. I absolutely agree that the final words of Thoreau’s sentence “when I came to die, discover that I had not lived” conjures up feelings of fear and grief but in saying that, it also brings insight and wisdom. It reminds mortals such as ourselves that we should not take life for granted and in a way it encourages us to make every day meaningful and significant because that’s what ultimately determines what our life is—a collection of “these” days.